you should have made her big ol' titties the thumbnail.
Its really solid overall, like game concept art quality. The only suggestion I have is maybe make the back lighting on the guy and his face a touch brighter, its hard to tell he's facing the viewer zoomed out.
the flecks of blue add a really incredible touch
I can't belive you ripped off spinalalarm, your def getting reported online
oh no I am truly horrible smh
I really like this. I do think however that it would benefit from the having the green in the background slightly more concentrated around the bust and things, and crop the white out a good bit more.
Thank you sir. I think you're right about that, it was something that bugged me too. I appreciate the advice.
The animated facial expressions seem solid, I would recommend however with the head/hair and the rest of the body you try working with simpler shapes. Try using just a rectangle for the body and a ellipse for the head, animate those, then redraw your character with more details on a layer on top of that. If you're just starting out I think this loop is a very strong sign of good things to come.
As a stand alone illustration, it's a little dull. The character design in the context of an animation, however, I think would be really solid.
This is really solid all around, love to see more
I think its definitely a good start in the right direction, try adding more shadings to the facial expression, both with lighter and darker colors, it'll definitely give the face a lot more depth. If you need any recommendations about where to start I'd say watch Jazza's "Painting with Brushes in Photoshop."
Wow thanks! didn't expect anyone to see this, nor did I expect such a helpful review!
I just like this a heck of a lot.
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